Selig's trip to Lake Buena Vista yesterday

[2hoophead]

last minute escort!

 

www.jsonline.com/story/index.aspx?id=616731

 

better? http://forum.brewerfan.net/images/smilies/frown.gif

[pogokat]

when posting a link, please post some description of the link or commentary of the article...just posting a link is not really enough..

[Team Canada]

better?

 

 

That still really doesn't tell the reader very much or in what context, unless you happen to know what was happening there and why Selig would have needed the escort.

 

Better might be something like this:

 

 

Selig needed a last minute police escort to get to get to the draft in time for the televised start.